?1. The English translation of this one shot doesn't match the story. The 2nd guy who is bullying gets his ass kicked by the 2nd MLC & is chased away, so it's not a harem 2. The artwork is a mess: the panels are too small for the dialog bubbles & sound wording to fit.The story was cute. Not enough to keep it though. Rent this, don't keep it, & get it on a sale.?

?So Cute!?I Love this story so much!?

???YES, SO CUTE!!!???Another one I ABSOLUTELY LOVE!!!??? ?One question though, can Shogo & Daigo have children together??Do they have any children together?? Those things would be interesting to find out. Do Yoshito & Ume have another child, or more than one??The author could do another book for this.?

??SO CUTE!!!?? I already LOVE THIS AUTHOR!!!? I'm going to reread this story so many times! This is an excellent purchase! I'm going to look for more works from this author!?

I like this story. The artwork is great. ?

Quite a bit of smut for 32 pages! I like this one. I have 2 questions. Has she basically joined the staff? Is that her new job? If you like a lot of smut, menage, (in this case, 4 way, 3 guys + girl) this is a good one to read. This is the first 4 person, reverse harem menage I've ever read.?

This story is so cute, so adorable, so funny. It's really well done. The artwork is great. ?

I do like this story, but I'm a bit confused about the end. Did he fall in love with her, or not? Earlier in the story, he referred to her as his "doll" when he still had revenge on his mind, & then again at the end of the story. Aside from that, I really like this story. I gave this one 4 stars because it doesn't clarify his feelings for her at the end.?

I really like this story. It's cute. Ah, if all first loves could end up like that.?

So cute!! Get this one!