sweet story. Diabetes ahead.

I expected from the title and picture a sweet story of the pairs.There is no story, no development, they are already together and get it on, ok I thought, then smut: but there is no art (bodies) you can admire (simple drawing, the expressions on the faces were cute), and what is drawn hides behind so many "noises" and talkbubbles, you don`t even see what`s going on. Half or partly even a third of that would have been enough.I don`t mind simple art, if I get a cute story, and I don't mind smut only, if the art and especially the bodies is accordingly good. I regret buying this. Cute expressions on faces alone are not enough.

Reread it the third time now. Still cute. Still nice art. Still nice story. One of the best.

The two chapters are a good beginning, it's a promising plot, but as before stated, there needs to be more chapters with more developement and other things. It is not satisfying as it is.

Naivity, cluelessness, misunderstandings, awkwardness, cluelessness, more misunderstandings, covered in a sweet glaze of sugar. cute art. could be more story. feels like a dream.

Title is program. Two and a half pairs in three intertwinged stories, many emotions, not always fulfilled, expect no smut. This is definitifly too short for that price.

This can't be completed. The story has merely started. So promising. Where is the rest? I expect at least three or more chapters.

No easy read. The story could be good, if it wasn't so hard to read. The first chapter starts confusing, and later there are some places, where this occurrs again, matching the inner confusion of one protagonist. Also you can't figure out sometimes who speaks. The end was pretty sudden and unsuspected. Not much explained. If the author reads this: You can't expect people to read the air in a manga. We readers can't know what you imagine in your mind if you don't spell it out. Please do better next time.

This is pure bullying. No love or even consideration of the other involved. So story terrible, art ok.

This is signed as complete, but storywise it seems like there is a whole chapter 7 missing. Could be better.