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thewritinggirl's Reviews & Ratings

2022-11-11
Sooo cute and hot, the characters were amazing, the story was so good and unlike any I'd read before. Definitely worth buying!!
2022-11-10
SO GOOD would so recommend this, the drawing is great, the characters are well developed, lovable and the way their relationship develops is so perfect!!! Would 10000% recommend (and there is a LOT of smutty scenes...)
2022-11-10
The beginning was great, I loved how the guy was so beefy and intimidating but such a softie at heart. My only issue is it's feeling a little too long now. The story is dragging and becoming less interesting. But the start was really enjoyable and entertaining, and some of the characters are really good
2022-11-10
I wasn't particularly keen on the fact she was so willing to give in to her ex-husbands psychotic way when she has a perfectly kind and sweet guy who loved her and was willing to take care of her... Then there was a real unnecessary tangent at the end. It's quite masochistic, so if you're into that then fine but I wasn't particularly keen
2022-11-09
It was okay. Nothing brilliant but alright. The art and smut scenes were good but it was open ended which was a bit unsatisfying.
2022-11-07
Why. Can't. The. Male. Lead. Ever. Keep. It. In. His. PANTS?!!?!? Like seriously this story was worth 5 stars up until the point he sleeps with someone else despite claiming he loves his girlfriend. UGH. I'm writing this review after ch20, I just hope it's all resolved okay. Everything else is great though, good art, good story, good smut, good angst.
2022-11-07
Okay soooo the step-bro is VERY forceful. Like for the first 5 chapters it felt like he was forcing himself on her. It was the cliché story of a guy teasing the girl he likes. But the last chapter was great, plus the art is so good
2022-11-07
YAY MORE OF RYU AND RIKU these two are so cute, this author is amazing and I love all their works. There's even a whole amazing angst bit in this one but it all ends perfectly, DEFINITELY worth the money (and of course there's lots of hawt smuuut)
2022-11-07
I love this author soooo much, I read The Trail of His Fingertips first and I'm glad I did because the stories intertwine loosely (Ryo makes his debut in that manga whilst the two main characters in it feature in Melty Kisses). Anyway Melty Kisses is soooo good, Ryo and Riku are perfect and so cute, there's plenty of smut and the story is brilliant. I'd give it more than 5 stars is I could
2022-11-06
Sooo pretty and sweet and hot and you can see the true love they have for each other-I kinda somehow manage to look past the fact they're TWINS and just focus on their relationship...