Crookshanks25's Reviews & Ratings
2021-04-15
If you're here for yaoi, walk away. This won't satisfy you. Now onto the review: I loved this story! It was cute, well paced and unique! It wasn't a rehash of a trope you've read a million times (I love those too) but actually something new. Even in the world of gender swap books, it was different! I love the characters as well. The whole story was very sweet and fluffy. My only criticism is that there should have been more time with Hibiki as a man. Almost all of their intimate moments happen when Hibiki is a woman. Sometimes it feels like the story skips weeks just so Hibiki can be a girl most of the time. Why? Hibiki is supposed to be accepted as both sexes so why does the story focus more on Hibiki as a girl? That's the only reason I docked a star. The sex scenes could have been elaborated a bit but I still love them. Overall, this story is adorable and I love it!
2021-01-02
The first chapter was interesting but the rest were very disappointing. I dislike stories where the main character suffers throughout the whole story just to get nothing at the end. Based off the premise and picture, I was expecting some sort of threesome or at least a 4th person would show up so you would end with 2 couples of 2. This is the only story I haven't reread or downloaded onto the app. I have at least 40 stories downloaded at the time of writing this comment.
2020-12-18
What did I just read? The detective/kidnapper is dumb so that the criminal easily tricks the detective. Not in a fun, sexy way but a confusing, anticlimactic way. The detective stalks the criminal for years so that he can... immediately give up? There's surprisingly little passion for a story that sounds like it should have years worth of emotion built up.